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Roast my landing page: 4,000 visitors, 0.8% signup rate

LLeo Martin5 hours ago2 comments

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Context from the maker

DataViz Studio turns spreadsheets into charts people actually read. Traffic is fine thanks to a couple of newsletter mentions, but almost nobody signs up.

I suspect the hero is too abstract and the pricing table scares people off. Tell me what you'd change first. Don't be nice about it.

Community score

3.0/ 5 from 3 reviews

First impression: 2.7
Clarity: 2.3
Design: 3.7
Value: 3.3

Would they use it?

Would use 33%
Maybe 33%
Wouldn't 33%

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Discussion

AArjun Rao 5 hours ago
Second the hero comment. Your best asset is the demo GIF and it's below the fold on a laptop.
- LLeo MartinOP4 hours ago
  Fair. Moving it up today and I'll report back with numbers next week.

Reviews

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Early adopter 15
1 hour ago · Would use it: Yes
3.5
First impression
3
Clarity
3
Design
4
Value
4
What works
Free tier is generous and the signup is one click.
What doesn't
Three pricing tiers with eleven rows each is a lot. Cut it to the five rows people actually compare.
E
Early adopter 10
3 hours ago · Would use it: No
2.8
First impression
3
Clarity
2
Design
3
Value
3
What works
Pricing is reasonable for teams.
What doesn't
I couldn't tell whether this connects to Google Sheets or needs a CSV upload. That is the first question I'd have and it's answered in the FAQ at the very bottom.
E
Early adopter 7
4 hours ago · Would use it: Maybe
2.8
First impression
2
Clarity
2
Design
4
Value
3
What works
The product screenshots are gorgeous. The chart examples halfway down are the best thing on the page.
What doesn't
The hero says "insight at the speed of thought" which tells me nothing. Lead with the before/after spreadsheet to chart shot you have further down.